Week 1 images from Tina
I've finished the first week's assignments and am attaching my results. I totally misunderstood the number ones and tried to adjust them to black and white with the most contrast.
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Tina,
Good Job overall. A few minor details remain...
Ok, maybe not so minor but fixable...First things first. There is a magenta cast in the shadows overall. See the screen shots below. It is not a big deal because the By the Numbers part of the class is this week and next and you should do a BTN correction on this image in RGB to get the color right.
Also there is a heaviness to the image overall that a slight brightening of the whole image improves.
Overall a good recovery of the image and you made a great choice for your neutral on the white side of the boat. I added a midtone neutral from the splash on the right of the frame.
Good Job overall. A few minor details remain...
Ok, maybe not so minor but fixable...First things first. There is a magenta cast in the shadows overall. See the screen shots below. It is not a big deal because the By the Numbers part of the class is this week and next and you should do a BTN correction on this image in RGB to get the color right.
Also there is a heaviness to the image overall that a slight brightening of the whole image improves.
Overall a good recovery of the image and you made a great choice for your neutral on the white side of the boat. I added a midtone neutral from the splash on the right of the frame.
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re: Lady Liberty. Solid work. Anything I do to it makes it look worse. Nicely done...
re: The Balls in the Fountain. Again nicely done. Anything else and again you start to hurt the image more than you help it...
re: Yellow Flowers. See screen shot below. Good job keeping the hues all in the same area. The greens look good and the yellows are all consistent.
re: Ellis Island Building. You might want to try to saturate it a bit more but it is a subjective problem. I see the bricks as being a bit mute but I understand if you think they are too far. It's hard to get over the "fear" of over saturation. The image is in a good place but try bumping the saturation and see if it's better for you...If not hold your ground on it...
re: the numbers. They all look pretty good. The second set of 1-2 looks a bit dark but otherwise they are good.
Nicely done...
Greg
re: The Balls in the Fountain. Again nicely done. Anything else and again you start to hurt the image more than you help it...
re: Yellow Flowers. See screen shot below. Good job keeping the hues all in the same area. The greens look good and the yellows are all consistent.
re: Ellis Island Building. You might want to try to saturate it a bit more but it is a subjective problem. I see the bricks as being a bit mute but I understand if you think they are too far. It's hard to get over the "fear" of over saturation. The image is in a good place but try bumping the saturation and see if it's better for you...If not hold your ground on it...
re: the numbers. They all look pretty good. The second set of 1-2 looks a bit dark but otherwise they are good.
Nicely done...
Greg
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