Taroko Gorge - Thomas

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Postby mikemeister_admin » Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:30 pm

Here is my try. A bit too fast but maybe worth a comment from the expert.
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Postby ggroess » Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:04 pm

A bit to fast perhaps...the sky is in dire need of help...The greens are very nice and you have separated them nicely.

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Postby mikemeister_admin » Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:58 pm

Fully agree about heaven. But no idea how to improve that part.
Seems to be some white clouds hanging over mountains with very little information, or?? What have I missed?
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Postby ggroess » Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:07 pm

You have not missed too much; the sky itself is pretty blown but the hillside could use a bit of a rescue.  You also have a slight blue cast overall you might like to move the neutral a bit and see if it gets better...you certainly have the color in there which is good.

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