Blurring the background was a masterstroke! I'm kicking myself for not having thought of doing so myself; having seen your version, it seems like such an obvious thing to do. Your correction looks great!
I have a question for you. You said:
Too saturated meant too dark and too focused.
When you have a moment, could you clarify what you meant by this. I'm having a difficult time understanding what you mean. Just me being dense I'm sure ;)
Cheers,
Lee.